Month: September 2019

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Don’t Push in Line

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: Cute song!! Is that you Kate? Really cleverly put together and well performed! AND, a message that we need to hear more these days. Great job!!

Constructive Comments: Works just the way it is. Keep it up!! Take care. Greg

Broadjam Artist: HAWC
Song: Invasion

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: New Wave sound, typical of today’s sounds

Constructive Comments: For my taste it is a little overproduced, but I am old schoolThis the same thing over and over which loses the listener. Oh, Ok There is a change at 3:40 which is better, I would add that a little bit earlierThe background voices are effective around 4:40Keep On Trucking! Catnip=+=

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Lost In Love

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: Sounds like some of the groups from the 60’s or 70’s that I haven’t heard in WHILE

Constructive Comments: NOTHING WRONG WITH THIS SONG THAT A BREAK WOULDNT HELP. REMEMBER WE LISTENERS GET BORED IN 7 SECONDS IF SOMETHING DOESNT CHANGE. YOU HAVE ALL THE ELEMENTS YOU NEED TO GET THERE, JUST KEEP PUNCHIN!DONT KNOW IF YOU HAVE THE HOME STUDIO AND YOU COULD EASILY ADD A BREAK BUT THATS WHERE I WOULD LIKE THIS SONG TO GOHOPE THIS HELPS! ALL THE BEST. CATNIP=+=

Broadjam Artist: Toni Fournier
Song: Love To Be In Love

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: sounds like a song from the 60’s, a little Grateful Dead Blues if you will

Constructive Comments: Not Bad but for some reason this song doesn’t move me like some of your others do. Again, the same pattern over and over puts me to sleep after a short while—you have to keep the song changing or I start daydreaming about something else.The reason we have a break is to keep us alert so we don’t forget what we are doing. Ex: stop the song in the middle and Scream—then start again! Etc.Nevertheless, we keep on striving to find that special tune that will ignite the fires of Ulysses!Keep On Trucking! Catnip=+=

Broadjam Artist: Infinite Sonic
Song: Perfect Autumn

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: Sounds a little new age, as is. typical of the new sound

Constructive Comments: For my simple old ears it sounds a little overproduced. I prefer to keep things simple but I am old school for sureAll The Best! Catnip

Broadjam Artist: Ladee V
Song: Almighty One

Reviewer: D.j.G-Low

Positive Comments: I love the passion the artist has about the song. And seemed too keep it throughout.. honestly, she has a great sound. And actually more of her on sound. .

Constructive Comments: Constructive critism , I think you could of keep that alright growling deep down inside more. Seemed to wind,down just aittle but before she should have. But it a while. It’s a beautiful song, it was well put together and the production was good as Well.

Broadjam Artist: Toni Fournier
Song: Love Can Be True

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: you’ve got a good theme, a real theme, its worth working on

Constructive Comments: you need to build a break in the song, a rest, or even a stopRemember,we listeners get bored after 7 seconds, most of the timeALL THE BEST As I said, youre really coming along!P.