Broadjam Artist: HAWC
Song: I’m Dying
Reviewer: Ladee V
Positive Comments: Really enjoyed the song once it got going. Vocals were nice and I loved how you evoked emotions in this song. Great instrumentation and originality. Great job!
Constructive Comments: I thought the intro with the voicemail messages was rather long. They say the first 30-45 seconds of a song will decide whether or not they’re interested in hearing. This intro was over a minute long. I’d shorten it down to 2 instead of three. Just a thought. Other than that it was a great song.