Broadjam Artist: Doug Mayberry
Song: Thank You (Codi’s Song)
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: It’s always good to hear a sweet Christian love song. You can tell the vocalist really means what he is singing. I can hear the passion in his voice. The intro is really pretty and the instrumentation is very nicely done. Somebody put a lot of love and thought into the keys/arrangement.
Constructive Comments: It wouldn’t quite work for a wedding because of the bridge. “If we never come to pass.” Bring up the vocal in the mix, especially at the beginning of the song. The second to the last note before the resolve bothered me for some reason. Work on SMOOTH FLOW of the lyrics with the melody, so it sounds natural the way it rolls off your tongue. Verse 2: He is who I see. Kind of sounds awkward. “Though I tell you all the time, I haven’t told you in a while.” That needs improvement. It sounds like you were struggling to find something to rhyme with smile, so you resorted to something that doesn’t make a lot of sense. I hope I don’t sound too critical. I want to encourage you to keep on writing and recording. And I hope you got the girl!