Broadjam Artist: Toni Fournier
Song: You Turn Away
Reviewer: Margie & Art Corey
Positive Comments: At first listen, this song has the vocal sound of the Group Yes! Which is pretty Neat! There are a few issues with tonality though…..perhaps just a return to the Studio and give a more cautious attempt to pay attention to the notes of the song! The vocalist has great feeling for the words, but intonation/pitch is really important to music! Don’t mean to be so tough with this review, sorry!!
Constructive Comments: Again, the intonation of the notes sung, really get in the way of this cool song……just re-sing it and I bet the tune will be much better!!