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Broadjam Artist: Bob BentleySong: Cowboys and Indians Abridged – Bob BentleyReviewer: Brion JamesPositive Comments: Good intent! Constructive Comments: The tenses are confusing. Past, present, future. Who are you singing to? Who is singing this? They, …
Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Cowboys and Indians Abridged – Bob Bentley
Reviewer: Brion James
Positive Comments: Good intent!
Constructive Comments: The tenses are confusing. Past, present, future. Who are you singing to? Who is singing this? They, “he” “Mr” “your” hmmm