Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: On Any Given L.A. Night (Pop – Adult Contemporary)
Reviewer: Pete Papageorge
Positive Comments: I liked the singer’s voice, and the guitar work was good as well. Good recording. I feel the sentiment of the lyrics and can empathize with the attitude.
Constructive Comments: First, the writer needs to arrange the lyric sheet as follows:1st VerseChorus2nd VerseChorus3rd VerseOtherwise, it’s a little hard to follow. We don’t need to see the chord changes, either. I think there needs to be a lot more work done to the lyrics in particular they need to have a fresher focus. One of these Nights is the title of the Eagles hits. That’s a lot to overcome, and just adding L.A. isn’t going to do it. Finally, the chorus should be the same throughout the song for it to be commercial.