Break Free by Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff AshbakerSong: Break FreeReviewer: Greg JohnsonPositive Comments: Really cool song!! Very creative subject matter and lyrics nail the concept! Vocal/production sound quite good, and the parts sound quite well played. The arr…

Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: Break Free

Reviewer: Greg Johnson

Positive Comments: Really cool song!! Very creative subject matter and lyrics nail the concept! Vocal/production sound quite good, and the parts sound quite well played. The arrangement is very appropriate and there is good prosody with the lyric and melody. Very fun, and well done song!

Constructive Comments: As much as I like the lyric, and the clever approach to the subject matter, I feel you could really use another verse. You have set up something so well, and not dug further into what could be a really cool story…..You got me, and I wanted to hear more. REALLY GOOD writing!! Well done! Take care. Greg