Broadjam Artist: Pete Papageorge
Song: BRIDGE OF ROSES
Reviewer: Always Music
Positive Comments: I like the progression you used, very well articulated lyrics. Not overly bulky with words, using elongated notes while singing was a good choice instead of jamming in more words just to “improve” the quality of the song. Some parts were a tiny bit pitchy, but not so much in a bad way. It fit the style of music very well. Overall, very well done and I like where it’s going.
Constructive Comments: Depending on the idea you’re trying to instill in this song, maybe going for a flatter key signature would be a better fit, for this particular singer. Adding in some layers underneath, just to round out the sound more might not be a bad idea, I could not really hear the low end bass. Maybe have it doing something other than the root.