Broadjam Artist: Toni Fournier
Song: My Own Person
Reviewer: Greg Johnson
Positive Comments: There is a lot of nice stuff here! The melody is quite pretty. The vocal has quite a bit of feel, although I don’t know if it is contemporary. The harmony is sweetly done! Musically, this all makes sense to me.
Constructive Comments: The acoustic guitar sounds probably too loud, and maybe a bit boomy. THere are some good lines in the lyric but the message is somewhat wondering and not concise enough. With the vocal, it could be processed in a little more mellow way. I think you are on to something good here but I feel it could still be improved. Nice work! Take care. Greg