Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: Love In The Wild (Country-Contemporary/Pop)
Reviewer: Greg Johnson
Positive Comments: I think I reviewed another one of your songs….liked that one too!! This is just an extremely pleasant listen. It is bright, optimistic and just feels good! Your voice works great and I think the basic arrangement works just right.
Constructive Comments: The only line I’m not crazy about is the one that ends in “no harm”. It has a bit of feeling like you were going for a difficult rhyme and the thought seems a little out of place. I sometimes find the last line I want, and work back to the line before it….not as obvious if it’s a little unnatural. Great song!! Take care. Gre