Young Love by Marilyn Hall

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn HallSong: Young LoveReviewer: MajorLeagueBeatsPositive Comments: I liked the originality of the song but I believe you placed it in the wrong genre. The sound was of quality but the arrangement of the lyrics were a little off. …

Marilyn Hall

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: Young Love

Reviewer: MajorLeagueBeats

Positive Comments: I liked the originality of the song but I believe you placed it in the wrong genre. The sound was of quality but the arrangement of the lyrics were a little off. The build up to the hook was good but I wanted to feel the emphasis of how you felt more. Overall it was a unique song so I believe that was the correct genre.

Constructive Comments: Where to start. I honestly stopped playing it halfway through the first hook. I thought the lyrics were too generic and lacked a lot of substance making me feel that this wasn’t written from the heart. I really can’t say much more than that because that really threw my whole vibe off. The music had me until you started singing. Not saying you can’t sing I just think you should be more creative with the wording and make it sound more personal.