Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Take A Black Eye For Love / Hard Rock
Reviewer: Sixty Miles Down
Positive Comments: To me this sounds like an idea you were trying to work out, not an actual song so I’m going to give feedback on this as a work in progress. Forgive me if I’m wrong. That’s just how I’m hearing it. I hear a really cool melodic idea here that’s very catchy. There’s a lot of cool soloing and harmonies in here as well.
Constructive Comments: Ok here’s what I’m hearing. I think there’s a little too much chorus on the guitars. They sound a little out of tune which can happen when too much of that effect is used. I think the playing can be a little tighter. The drums are way too low in the mix. Bring them up and work them out. Add fills and maybe cut the time in half somewhere. There’s a really good idea here and there’s so many different directions this idea can go. Keep working on it and you’ll have a great song on your hands. Best of luck!