Broadjam Artist: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat
Song: GONNA BE ON TIME!
Reviewer: Austin Mulka
Positive Comments: All of the instrumentals were well played. Everything was on time and in tune. The guitar had a jazzy feel. The lyrics were creative. The instrumental of the song was quite catchy and decently produced. TONS of potential. I’ve reviewed other songs that felt like the production was so off that they’d never get a quality song–this song shows you have a ton of talent and there is a lot of potential for this song.
Constructive Comments: Something about the melody felt off to me. There were a lot of pitch problems, and the notes just didn’t seem to go where one would expect. When I hear a bluesy song, I’m expecting the melody and the vocals to be in sync. To flow with one another. With this song, it just felt like the vocals and the instrumental weren’t on the same page. Almost like it was two different songs. I think the melody needs to be tweaked to match the instrumentals and arrangement.