Broadjam Artist: StarburstRecords
Song: Extricating Lies (Jones/Starburst)
Reviewer: JllVMINVTI
Positive Comments: Hi, thanks for letting me listen a bit. I was impressed with the energy and focus you brought to the track, and the originality overall was great. The instrumental was pretty amazing, especially that intro, that got me excited and reeled me in hook-line-and-sinker (I think thats how you say it). Also was impressed with the track length, and how you didnt follow the popular formula of making 3-5 min long songs. This was short and sweet, which I think is a strength of the track.
Constructive Comments: I enjoyed the intro very much. However, when you come in on beat at 13 seconds, it is much too harsh and unexpected upon the listener, since there is no build up. Also the volume level of your vocals is too high above the rest of the instrumental track. As for the recording of the vocals itself, it didn’t sound properly mixed to me, and instead of having the vocals sit center of the instrumental, flush with everything else, it sounds like it is atop of the beat, and not surrounded/complemented by the beat. I also was not one for the writing of the track, as it seemed to be just mainly words thrown together without a communicable meaning, other than conspiracy, or edgy topics. This is not to say you cannot improve the song, however, I would go back and try tweaking the things I mentioned first.