Broadjam Artist: Toni Fournier
Song: It’ll Never End
Reviewer: Barry Osbourn
Positive Comments: I think I know who this is? ITs not a bad song, and your singing is good for the style I like your pitch and delivery and emotion in the singing, and the instrumentation isn’t bad I just have one siggestion
Constructive Comments: Let me ask you a question, if you saw someone dressed up in a suit and look sharp in every way and then you look down and they have old tennis shoes on their feet. It kinda ruins the whole rest of the look right. beautiful suit tie, hair combed, and then boom old chuck Taylors on the feet.OK so I use this example in reference to you drum sounds. Its not necessary to have them, This song would have been fine and not had any issues with just acoustic guitar and bass. You ever heard the old saying “if you don’t have anything nice to say don’t say anything at all” well that goes for music too, If its not improving the overall sound then don’t include it, at the end of the day, all you have to have is ONE instrument and One voice to make a song, and if your an amazing singer, you don’t even need the instrument. So my advice, until you get a little better understanding of how to apply drum sounds just leave them out. Or get GarageBand on a Mac, they work great, they do fills and volume changes and rhythm changes, You can’t tell its not a real drummer.