Broadjam Artist: Cask of Characters
Song: First Ride
Reviewer: Barry Osbourn
Positive Comments: The best thing I think is the song itself, its a good story and the lyrics are well done
Constructive Comments: The downside, and I’ll first say that this review system isn’t set up for honesty, if I want my rating to be high but I’ll be straight with you anyway, I think the vocal performance needs some work, The timing is off a little in places and the overall energy is lacking, I say that not from a position of arrogance, I’ve tried to sing my whole life and I just can’t do it, so I write instrumental music, so believe me, I know how hard it is to be a good singer. Your voice quality, pitch isn’t bad, it just sounds a little amateur, maybe if you practice the song more so it flows off your tongue without any hesitation, and the chorus needs a bigger dynamic either with the music or double up your voice, it just doesn’t set itself apart from the verse very well, anyway, its a good song, but I think you should try another take on the vocals.