Deep Sleep by Wayne Ammons

Broadjam Artist: Wayne AmmonsSong: Deep SleepReviewer: John HazlettPositive Comments: This might could be used in some type of dramatic movie.Constructive Comments: A a bit repetitious.

Wayne Ammons

Broadjam Artist: Wayne Ammons
Song: Deep Sleep

Reviewer: John Hazlett

Positive Comments: This might could be used in some type of dramatic movie.

Constructive Comments: A a bit repetitious.

Ghosts In The Backwater by Trinity

Broadjam Artist: TrinitySong: Ghosts In The BackwaterReviewer: John HazlettPositive Comments: This reminds me of the depiction of a massive city that becomes a giant submarine. It’s journey through the sea and all its wonders.Constructive Comments: Thi…

Trinity

Broadjam Artist: Trinity
Song: Ghosts In The Backwater

Reviewer: John Hazlett

Positive Comments: This reminds me of the depiction of a massive city that becomes a giant submarine. It’s journey through the sea and all its wonders.

Constructive Comments: This is more like the category Unique-Theme music.

Runnin’ Outta Time by Warm Glow Studios

Broadjam Artist: Warm Glow StudiosSong: Runnin’ Outta TimeReviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip PatPositive Comments: interesting song, rap is not my first choice of music, but compared to other rap this is on the upper endConstructive Comments: I wouldn’t …

Warm Glow Studios

Broadjam Artist: Warm Glow Studios
Song: Runnin’ Outta Time

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: interesting song, rap is not my first choice of music, but compared to other rap this is on the upper end

Constructive Comments: I wouldn’t change much here but a break somewhere in the song would give some extra punch to this song, Remember the average listener falls asleep after about 9 seconds if the sound does not change.Keep On Groovin! catnip=+=

Beating Heart by Serneka

Broadjam Artist: SernekaSong: Beating HeartReviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip PatPositive Comments: Like the combination of instruments here. Artist has a soft, attractive voice. Reminds me of the Mo-town days for sure.Constructive Comments: You have th…

Serneka

Broadjam Artist: Serneka
Song: Beating Heart

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: Like the combination of instruments here. Artist has a soft, attractive voice. Reminds me of the Mo-town days for sure.

Constructive Comments: You have the potential for a hit here. Everything is there but it needs a little tweaking.The vocal needs some attention. This artist has a potentially powerful, clean voice but something is out. EQ could help, and it sounds like the vocal track is mixed a tad too hot so there is not enough headroom to allow the fidelity to come through. A simple remix could fix this.Hope this helps! catnip=+=

Heart of a stranger by CemmeC

Broadjam Artist: CemmeCSong: Heart of a strangerReviewer: Lonnie GPositive Comments: quirky vocals and nice guitarConstructive Comments: of course some percussion in the 2nd verse and some soft strtings in the tune…

CemmeC

Broadjam Artist: CemmeC
Song: Heart of a stranger

Reviewer: Lonnie G

Positive Comments: quirky vocals and nice guitar

Constructive Comments: of course some percussion in the 2nd verse and some soft strtings in the tune…

A Message To Keep Me Afloat by Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff AshbakerSong: A Message To Keep Me AfloatReviewer: Lonnie GPositive Comments: peppy tune…good folky/pop tunenice addition with the pedal steel.adds that country vibeand good harmoniesConstructive Comments: there’s little to add …

Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: A Message To Keep Me Afloat

Reviewer: Lonnie G

Positive Comments: peppy tune…good folky/pop tunenice addition with the pedal steel.adds that country vibeand good harmonies

Constructive Comments: there’s little to add maybe some tonal suggestions to brighten it up..that’s it

Dirty Daddy by Warren Hein

Broadjam Artist: Warren HeinSong: Dirty DaddyReviewer: Lonnie GPositive Comments: kinda country swing rather than Chicago but still a nice groove.Constructive Comments: smoky vocal and nice guitar work…

Warren Hein

Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: Dirty Daddy

Reviewer: Lonnie G

Positive Comments: kinda country swing rather than Chicago but still a nice groove.

Constructive Comments: smoky vocal and nice guitar work…

Out Of The Equation by Bob Bentley

Broadjam Artist: Bob BentleySong: Out Of The EquationReviewer: Lonnie GPositive Comments: Really solid Intro…Constructive Comments: cool…shades of Tom Petty….a few little points…you can drop all the “understoods”…if you get what i meani.e: t…

Bob Bentley

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Out Of The Equation

Reviewer: Lonnie G

Positive Comments: Really solid Intro…

Constructive Comments: cool…shades of Tom Petty….a few little points…you can drop all the “understoods”…if you get what i meani.e: try to eliminate all the she’s…She made her way down that familiar trackShe wiped her eyes as she pulled the doorShe’s moving on, she wont be back no more made her way down that familiar track wiped her eyes as she pulled the door she’s moving on, wont be back no more”Now she can give out all the love she’s been saving”…could try:”gives out all the love she’s been saving”it just becomes more succinct…good to drop words that are more redundantvery nice tune….