Be My Redeemer-Revised by Marilyn Hall

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn HallSong: Be My Redeemer-RevisedReviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: Lyrics are clear and easy to make outConstructive Comments: I would add harmony to the chorus but it is very nice

Marilyn Hall

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: Be My Redeemer-Revised

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: Lyrics are clear and easy to make out

Constructive Comments: I would add harmony to the chorus but it is very nice

Endless Caves by Till

Broadjam Artist: TillSong: Endless CavesReviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: Love the orchestral arrangementConstructive Comments: Needs a hook or chorus. The orchestral arrangement seems to call for an intense build at some point.

Till

Broadjam Artist: Till
Song: Endless Caves

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: Love the orchestral arrangement

Constructive Comments: Needs a hook or chorus. The orchestral arrangement seems to call for an intense build at some point.

We come by amy abernathy

Broadjam Artist: amy abernathySong: We comeReviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: Quality of the vocal is very niceConstructive Comments: could use more adlib for emotional impact

amy abernathy

Broadjam Artist: amy abernathy
Song: We come

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: Quality of the vocal is very nice

Constructive Comments: could use more adlib for emotional impact

Forgive Myself by Doug Mayberry

Broadjam Artist: Doug MayberrySong: Forgive MyselfReviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: Great Harmonies and a good arrangementConstructive Comments: More passion in the vocal would help bring this up to a more emotional song

Doug Mayberry

Broadjam Artist: Doug Mayberry
Song: Forgive Myself

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: Great Harmonies and a good arrangement

Constructive Comments: More passion in the vocal would help bring this up to a more emotional song

Gotta Be a Doer by Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate CarpenterSong: Gotta Be a DoerReviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: I thought this would be a great song for a children’s showConstructive Comments: The song is more like a rhyme or motivational for a very young audience.

Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Gotta Be a Doer

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: I thought this would be a great song for a children’s show

Constructive Comments: The song is more like a rhyme or motivational for a very young audience.

Time To Love by Greg Lambert

Broadjam Artist: Greg LambertSong: Time To LoveReviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: the guitars and vocals are beautifulConstructive Comments: Needs a bridge or key change on repeat of chorus but beautiful song

Greg Lambert

Broadjam Artist: Greg Lambert
Song: Time To Love

Reviewer: Toni Fournier

Positive Comments: the guitars and vocals are beautiful

Constructive Comments: Needs a bridge or key change on repeat of chorus but beautiful song

Alone by John Hazlett

Broadjam Artist: John HazlettSong: AloneReviewer: Mike HallsPositive Comments: Nice short piece,nice coloration to accompany the droning Am chord from the other instruments. I dont know what it could be used in,maybe a nature TV program or something. G…

John Hazlett

Broadjam Artist: John Hazlett
Song: Alone

Reviewer: Mike Halls

Positive Comments: Nice short piece,nice coloration to accompany the droning Am chord from the other instruments. I dont know what it could be used in,maybe a nature TV program or something. Good job.

Constructive Comments: Its short so I cant comment on much of an arrangement but its very well done

Elf’s Jig by Jeana Potthoff

Broadjam Artist: Jeana PotthoffSong: Elf’s JigReviewer: Mike HallsPositive Comments: What can I say other than very pretty,the piano is very well played,this should definately be a good candidate for a TV ad of some sort,but not only that possibly inci…

Jeana Potthoff

Broadjam Artist: Jeana Potthoff
Song: Elf’s Jig

Reviewer: Mike Halls

Positive Comments: What can I say other than very pretty,the piano is very well played,this should definately be a good candidate for a TV ad of some sort,but not only that possibly incidental music for a movie. Its short and sweet which is good.

Constructive Comments: I cant say anything negative as it is a nice piece . Good job

Syllables by Teri Feaser

Broadjam Artist: Teri FeaserSong: SyllablesReviewer: Jeff MaguirePositive Comments: Smooth performance, sax is a nice touch.Constructive Comments: Constructive criticisms would be that overall the song sounds stilted and overly programmed, and the voca…

Teri Feaser

Broadjam Artist: Teri Feaser
Song: Syllables

Reviewer: Jeff Maguire

Positive Comments: Smooth performance, sax is a nice touch.

Constructive Comments: Constructive criticisms would be that overall the song sounds stilted and overly programmed, and the vocalist has some serious pitch issues. Song itself is not bad, opening line is good, with a little editing it might be ok. I’d consider a serious rework and either a different singer or auto tune and a lot of editing. The great thing about digital audio is that it is really easy to edit and you can do as many takes as you need, then just use the sections that are not out of tune.