
Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: Be My Redeemer-Revised
Reviewer: Toni Fournier
Positive Comments: Lyrics are clear and easy to make out
Constructive Comments: I would add harmony to the chorus but it is very nice
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Broadjam Artist: Marilyn HallSong: Be My Redeemer-RevisedReviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: Lyrics are clear and easy to make outConstructive Comments: I would add harmony to the chorus but it is very nice

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: Be My Redeemer-Revised
Reviewer: Toni Fournier
Positive Comments: Lyrics are clear and easy to make out
Constructive Comments: I would add harmony to the chorus but it is very nice
Broadjam Artist: TillSong: Endless CavesReviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: Love the orchestral arrangementConstructive Comments: Needs a hook or chorus. The orchestral arrangement seems to call for an intense build at some point.

Broadjam Artist: Till
Song: Endless Caves
Reviewer: Toni Fournier
Positive Comments: Love the orchestral arrangement
Constructive Comments: Needs a hook or chorus. The orchestral arrangement seems to call for an intense build at some point.
Broadjam Artist: amy abernathySong: We comeReviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: Quality of the vocal is very niceConstructive Comments: could use more adlib for emotional impact

Broadjam Artist: amy abernathy
Song: We come
Reviewer: Toni Fournier
Positive Comments: Quality of the vocal is very nice
Constructive Comments: could use more adlib for emotional impact
Broadjam Artist: Doug MayberrySong: Forgive MyselfReviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: Great Harmonies and a good arrangementConstructive Comments: More passion in the vocal would help bring this up to a more emotional song

Broadjam Artist: Doug Mayberry
Song: Forgive Myself
Reviewer: Toni Fournier
Positive Comments: Great Harmonies and a good arrangement
Constructive Comments: More passion in the vocal would help bring this up to a more emotional song
Broadjam Artist: Kate CarpenterSong: Gotta Be a DoerReviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: I thought this would be a great song for a children’s showConstructive Comments: The song is more like a rhyme or motivational for a very young audience.

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Gotta Be a Doer
Reviewer: Toni Fournier
Positive Comments: I thought this would be a great song for a children’s show
Constructive Comments: The song is more like a rhyme or motivational for a very young audience.
Broadjam Artist: Greg LambertSong: Time To LoveReviewer: Toni FournierPositive Comments: the guitars and vocals are beautifulConstructive Comments: Needs a bridge or key change on repeat of chorus but beautiful song

Broadjam Artist: Greg Lambert
Song: Time To Love
Reviewer: Toni Fournier
Positive Comments: the guitars and vocals are beautiful
Constructive Comments: Needs a bridge or key change on repeat of chorus but beautiful song
Broadjam Artist: Hank ThomasSong: Hooten’s HollerReviewer: Jared LoStraccoPositive Comments: Constructive Comments:

Broadjam Artist: Hank Thomas
Song: Hooten’s Holler
Reviewer: Jared LoStracco
Positive Comments:
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Broadjam Artist: John HazlettSong: AloneReviewer: Mike HallsPositive Comments: Nice short piece,nice coloration to accompany the droning Am chord from the other instruments. I dont know what it could be used in,maybe a nature TV program or something. G…

Broadjam Artist: John Hazlett
Song: Alone
Reviewer: Mike Halls
Positive Comments: Nice short piece,nice coloration to accompany the droning Am chord from the other instruments. I dont know what it could be used in,maybe a nature TV program or something. Good job.
Constructive Comments: Its short so I cant comment on much of an arrangement but its very well done
Broadjam Artist: Jeana PotthoffSong: Elf’s JigReviewer: Mike HallsPositive Comments: What can I say other than very pretty,the piano is very well played,this should definately be a good candidate for a TV ad of some sort,but not only that possibly inci…

Broadjam Artist: Jeana Potthoff
Song: Elf’s Jig
Reviewer: Mike Halls
Positive Comments: What can I say other than very pretty,the piano is very well played,this should definately be a good candidate for a TV ad of some sort,but not only that possibly incidental music for a movie. Its short and sweet which is good.
Constructive Comments: I cant say anything negative as it is a nice piece . Good job
Broadjam Artist: Teri FeaserSong: SyllablesReviewer: Jeff MaguirePositive Comments: Smooth performance, sax is a nice touch.Constructive Comments: Constructive criticisms would be that overall the song sounds stilted and overly programmed, and the voca…

Broadjam Artist: Teri Feaser
Song: Syllables
Reviewer: Jeff Maguire
Positive Comments: Smooth performance, sax is a nice touch.
Constructive Comments: Constructive criticisms would be that overall the song sounds stilted and overly programmed, and the vocalist has some serious pitch issues. Song itself is not bad, opening line is good, with a little editing it might be ok. I’d consider a serious rework and either a different singer or auto tune and a lot of editing. The great thing about digital audio is that it is really easy to edit and you can do as many takes as you need, then just use the sections that are not out of tune.