Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Once Upon A Time / Pop Ballad
Reviewer: Joy A Simons Brown
Positive Comments: I like the lyrics and the arrangement. I also like the entry and exit of the harmony.I hear good songwriting skills and good choice of melody pattern. This song reminds me of something by the Beatles with John Lennon. The lyrics are well delivered by the main vocalist and the song keep my interest right till the end.
Constructive Comments: Good song. However I kept hearing some ‘sustains’ in parts in the song. For instance the piano pedal in the introduction being held too long produces a slight discord. Attention to this would provide cleaner harmonies especially at the end of a line. Cut off the chord before picking up the next phrase. Nice work !!