Fire by Charleeboy

Broadjam Artist: CharleeboySong: FireReviewer: Kate CarpenterPositive Comments: Even though I am not familiar with this genre, I was impressed by this track. The vocal is passionately sung. The performer seems to have her own voice, not trying to sou…

Charleeboy

Broadjam Artist: Charleeboy
Song: Fire

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Even though I am not familiar with this genre, I was impressed by this track. The vocal is passionately sung. The performer seems to have her own voice, not trying to sound like someone else. “We should let the fire through.” Great lyric. “Everything leads me to you” another great one. Very cool “drip droppy” intro. I like the instrumentation. Pretty clever effects on the vocal. They enhance, and don’t detract from the production. Creative, original lyrics and storytelling. I didn’t hear anything trite in this song. Nice job!

Constructive Comments: Publish the lyrics on this song on your BJ site. I wish you the best in your career. I think the ending deserves a bit more treatment…why not make it as cool as the intro? Ending is rather abrupt.