New Orleans Down (2012) by Hattie Wilcox Music

Broadjam Artist: Hattie Wilcox MusicSong: New Orleans Down (2012)Reviewer: Fred KimmelPositive Comments: Gorgeous piano and Violin duet. Gets a little bit bluesey around 2:30, then resolves. Very cool stuff!Constructive Comments: None I can think of

Hattie Wilcox Music

Broadjam Artist: Hattie Wilcox Music
Song: New Orleans Down (2012)

Reviewer: Fred Kimmel

Positive Comments: Gorgeous piano and Violin duet. Gets a little bit bluesey around 2:30, then resolves. Very cool stuff!

Constructive Comments: None I can think of

Different Tracks by Bob Bentley

Broadjam Artist: Bob BentleySong: Different TracksReviewer: Doug MayberryPositive Comments: Great lyrics, great instrumentation. Great song!! Loved your voice, as well. I would love to hear more from you. Very marketable.Constructive Comments: Noth…

Bob Bentley

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: Different Tracks

Reviewer: Doug Mayberry

Positive Comments: Great lyrics, great instrumentation. Great song!! Loved your voice, as well. I would love to hear more from you. Very marketable.

Constructive Comments: Nothing negative or constructive to say. You have recorded a very fine song, here. Great job.

Eating me up inside by Zundeep

Broadjam Artist: ZundeepSong: Eating me up insideReviewer: DrmJPositive Comments: This song sounds like something from the late 70s/early 80s. It’s not a bad song but I think you could make it better. Add a bridge too.Constructive Comments: Add a bridge.

Zundeep

Broadjam Artist: Zundeep
Song: Eating me up inside

Reviewer: DrmJ

Positive Comments: This song sounds like something from the late 70s/early 80s. It’s not a bad song but I think you could make it better. Add a bridge too.

Constructive Comments: Add a bridge.

Golden Slumbers Beatles Medley by Donovan Tucker

Broadjam Artist: Donovan TuckerSong: Golden Slumbers Beatles MedleyReviewer: DrmJPositive Comments: I’d consider this song a candidate for muzac. The guitar playing is very good but it’s a cover song…so I doubt it’s very commercial in its present sta…

Donovan Tucker

Broadjam Artist: Donovan Tucker
Song: Golden Slumbers Beatles Medley

Reviewer: DrmJ

Positive Comments: I’d consider this song a candidate for muzac. The guitar playing is very good but it’s a cover song…so I doubt it’s very commercial in its present state.

Constructive Comments: Write your own music.

Love’s on the Redline / Rockabilly by Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt ClodsSong: Love’s on the Redline / RockabillyReviewer: DrmJPositive Comments: This song needs more to it. It gets a bit monotonous without breaks throughout the continuous rhythm. Try adding 2 more sepa…

Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Love’s on the Redline / Rockabilly

Reviewer: DrmJ

Positive Comments: This song needs more to it. It gets a bit monotonous without breaks throughout the continuous rhythm. Try adding 2 more separate guitar parts to the 1 rhythm that you already have. Try adding vocals (lyrics).

Constructive Comments: Add lyrics/vocals. Add additional guitar patterns.

I’ve Had Enough by Mark S. Ludes (MSL)

Broadjam Artist: Mark S. Ludes (MSL)Song: I’ve Had EnoughReviewer: DrmJPositive Comments: This song might work better if you made it into a novelty song like, “Mama Got Run Over By A Reindeer”. I’m not being rude, I’m serious. I think this song would h…

Mark S. Ludes (MSL)

Broadjam Artist: Mark S. Ludes (MSL)
Song: I’ve Had Enough

Reviewer: DrmJ

Positive Comments: This song might work better if you made it into a novelty song like, “Mama Got Run Over By A Reindeer”. I’m not being rude, I’m serious. I think this song would have better potential that way.

Constructive Comments: See above comments.

C’mon Lets Dance by Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt ClodsSong: C’mon Lets DanceReviewer: DrmJPositive Comments: The song started off good but didn’t really go anywhere. Would be a good idea to lengthen the song…add a bridge and a chorus. And add lyrics…

Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: C’mon Lets Dance

Reviewer: DrmJ

Positive Comments: The song started off good but didn’t really go anywhere. Would be a good idea to lengthen the song…add a bridge and a chorus. And add lyrics.

Constructive Comments: Add lyrics. Lengthen song.

Just Desserts- Instrumental by DeDe WedeKind

Broadjam Artist: DeDe WedeKindSong: Just Desserts- InstrumentalReviewer: DrmJPositive Comments: I’d like to hear this song with lyrics. It sounds like a good truck driving song to me. It’s a nice upbeat sound. Needs lyrics.Constructive Comments: Needs …

DeDe WedeKind

Broadjam Artist: DeDe WedeKind
Song: Just Desserts- Instrumental

Reviewer: DrmJ

Positive Comments: I’d like to hear this song with lyrics. It sounds like a good truck driving song to me. It’s a nice upbeat sound. Needs lyrics.

Constructive Comments: Needs lyrics.

christmas is a treasure by tim meyers

Broadjam Artist: tim meyersSong: christmas is a treasureReviewer: AuralovPositive Comments: This song would be well suited on a local advertising level. There is some pop inspired catchiness in the repetitive use of bells, and lyrics which would serve…

tim meyers

Broadjam Artist: tim meyers
Song: christmas is a treasure

Reviewer: Auralov

Positive Comments: This song would be well suited on a local advertising level. There is some pop inspired catchiness in the repetitive use of bells, and lyrics which would serve well within the context of a commercial. I mean this in the most sincere manner. I can hear this song being played during my 10:00 news broadcast.

Constructive Comments: I don’t think this is a religious song as such. Not that I feel it’s bad or anything, but it does convey a much more secular/commercial vibe than a personal statement on Good Old Desk. The singers voice works at a local level.