Broadjam Artist: Massa
Song: Worn Out Working 2
Reviewer: Bob Bentley
Positive Comments: This song has got a great country rock vibe with some fine playing and singing going on.
Constructive Comments: By sheer fluke I happened to listen to this song a short while ago when I was checking out the person who gave me the least constructive and most insulting review I’ve ever received. No worries, I’m a big boy and can take criticism and I absolutely believe in being straight with reviews but I also believe in being objective and encouraging. By all means criticise parts of the vocal but to say to a vocalist who clearly has some ability you’re a 1/5 – in other words can’t hold a tune – is hardly objective.Your “positive comments” were 100% negative and 1/5 for “Would you like to hear more from this artist”, now that’s just rude. As it happens, you are hearing more from this artist, but I’m not dropping to your level. So here are my constructive comments:Carrying loads down roads is a cliche best avoided. The concept of worn out working is fine but the lyrics don’t really stand up to close examination. Working at a mill is not down a hole and the eyes/ears verse just feels like a filler as it has no part in the story. Worth revisiting the lyrics maybe? Have a nice day.