Month: November 2018

Broadjam Artist: Mindless Sound Records,LLC
Song: Ice Cream

Reviewer: CodeSwitcher

Positive Comments: Okay, I was shocked. But it works. The girls in the club are gonna drive the boys wild with this one. You have a wicked mind. I think there will be a lot of great pitches for this Just suggestive enough to be sexy. Victoria’s Secret runway? I wouldn’t limit the pitches to just electronica either.

Constructive Comments: Just to have an extra version, you could put a dance beat under this and double your pitches. Just a thought. I don’t have any comments about changing anything else. Maybe a 30 second mix and a 60 second mix just in case. I do have one question. Vanilla or chocolate?

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Cold & Lonesome Life

Reviewer: Patrick P Welch

Positive Comments: I enjoyed th short pauses before guitarwork…good touch. Instrumentation all on track. This has a vintage feel to it. From my point of view that is good. Nice variety in back up instruments.

Constructive Comments: Perhaps some harmonies along the way would heat it up. I can imagine folks gliding across the danc floor to this,

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Cold & Lonesome Life

Reviewer: Patrick P Welch

Positive Comments: I enjoyed th short pauses before guitarwork…good touch. Instrumentation all on track. This has a vintage feel to it. From my point of view that is good. Nice variety in back up instruments.

Constructive Comments: Perhaps some harmonies along the way would heat it up. I can imagine folks gliding across the danc floor to this,

Broadjam Artist: Donovan Tucker
Song: Better Half

Reviewer: Patrick P Welch

Positive Comments: I like the way the song moves when you say “ask”. Dobro is nice…very pleasing sound that balances well with the vocals. I wonder how it would be sung to you instead of she?

Constructive Comments: Like I said above, I wonder if changing this song to a personal reflecttion to haer would be more powerful? Good song!

Broadjam Artist: Donovan Tucker
Song: Better Half

Reviewer: Patrick P Welch

Positive Comments: I like the way the song moves when you say “ask”. Dobro is nice…very pleasing sound that balances well with the vocals. I wonder how it would be sung to you instead of she?

Constructive Comments: Like I said above, I wonder if changing this song to a personal reflecttion to haer would be more powerful? Good song!

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: I Never Thought I’d Ever Feel This Good

Reviewer: Patrick P Welch

Positive Comments: This instrumentation appeals to me. This is radio ready as they say. the chord progression is interesting , keeping you headed toeard the positive emotion you are portraying. Nice little break with steel and fiddle, and guitar at the end is on target. Voice is pleasant, and in tune.

Constructive Comments: I’m not sure how you can do this, butone of the strengths of this song is the smoothness of it, on the other hand it might be good to have some place where your voice or the melody or something creates some contrast or tension.

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: I Never Thought I’d Ever Feel This Good

Reviewer: Patrick P Welch

Positive Comments: This instrumentation appeals to me. This is radio ready as they say. the chord progression is interesting , keeping you headed toeard the positive emotion you are portraying. Nice little break with steel and fiddle, and guitar at the end is on target. Voice is pleasant, and in tune.

Constructive Comments: I’m not sure how you can do this, butone of the strengths of this song is the smoothness of it, on the other hand it might be good to have some place where your voice or the melody or something creates some contrast or tension.

Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: All Because Of You (Country-Classic, Country-Traditional))

Reviewer: Patrick P Welch

Positive Comments: Guitar is clear and strong rythym. It is very easy to hear the distinct words. Your voice is very much like other country singers who are popular. I imagine you will do very well.

Constructive Comments: The theme of this song is strong and memorable. It might be good to find a way to take the music up a little bit after All because of you…some kind of lift, using melody, mayby a 2 chord going up to 4 or 5.

Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: All Because Of You (Country-Classic, Country-Traditional))

Reviewer: Patrick P Welch

Positive Comments: Guitar is clear and strong rythym. It is very easy to hear the distinct words. Your voice is very much like other country singers who are popular. I imagine you will do very well.

Constructive Comments: The theme of this song is strong and memorable. It might be good to find a way to take the music up a little bit after All because of you…some kind of lift, using melody, mayby a 2 chord going up to 4 or 5.

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: ICE MARCH (instrumental)

Reviewer: Toni Kimball

Positive Comments: This was a pleasant, interesting piece of music. Unique is a good place for the genre. It has a nice beat, not brass or nasty, but makes you want to daydream. I don’t know how many 560 characters are, but if you have to stretch your comments, they lose their meaning. I liked the song, of which I don’t like much modern music. Most of it is trashy. This was kind of classy. That’s all.

Constructive Comments: None. It was good as is.