Month: November 2018

Broadjam Artist: Ronald Arduini
Song: 3 MINUTES

Reviewer: Jeff Cowhick

Positive Comments: An interesting idea wasn’t sure if it was a serious emotional piece or just some kind of comedic parody of emotional songs. The quality and mix were great and the arrangement simple. The lyrics were clear and all but I was thrown off by the subject matter to be honest. The idea is good though. It is definitely a unique idea. I think that it needs to find a home, and I think that place may be limited to a short scene in a film.

Constructive Comments: This just isn’t the type of song that I am going to think of an hour from now. In order for it to be an earworm you need to have a more memorable hook to go with your countdown. This song is perfect for something like a suicide scene such as the one in Tommy Wiseau’s ‘The Room.’ Actually this song could be perfect for some kind of suicide prevention documentary.

Broadjam Artist: Ronald Arduini
Song: 3 MINUTES

Reviewer: Jeff Cowhick

Positive Comments: An interesting idea wasn’t sure if it was a serious emotional piece or just some kind of comedic parody of emotional songs. The quality and mix were great and the arrangement simple. The lyrics were clear and all but I was thrown off by the subject matter to be honest. The idea is good though. It is definitely a unique idea. I think that it needs to find a home, and I think that place may be limited to a short scene in a film.

Constructive Comments: This just isn’t the type of song that I am going to think of an hour from now. In order for it to be an earworm you need to have a more memorable hook to go with your countdown. This song is perfect for something like a suicide scene such as the one in Tommy Wiseau’s ‘The Room.’ Actually this song could be perfect for some kind of suicide prevention documentary.

Broadjam Artist: Jeana Potthoff
Song: Mysterious

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: Very beautiful piano playing – sounds like a piece for a very elegant movie. I like the plain piano and it’s solitary feel, timing is great!

Constructive Comments: Wonderful piano piece, I don’t think that I’d change a thing on this one however, it would sound good right where you stopped to bring in some strings but that’s just my opinion, the song is great as is.

Broadjam Artist: Jeana Potthoff
Song: Mysterious

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: Very beautiful piano playing – sounds like a piece for a very elegant movie. I like the plain piano and it’s solitary feel, timing is great!

Constructive Comments: Wonderful piano piece, I don’t think that I’d change a thing on this one however, it would sound good right where you stopped to bring in some strings but that’s just my opinion, the song is great as is.

Broadjam Artist: Edmond Allmond
Song: LONG WALK HOME

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I love the bubbly sounds at the beginning of this piece and how the song builds, very good recording – very suspenseful and cool.

Constructive Comments: Great sounding song, sounds like something that could work in many different types of movies, I can see it working well in a Mystery Movie or just a long flashback of the past – best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: Edmond Allmond
Song: LONG WALK HOME

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I love the bubbly sounds at the beginning of this piece and how the song builds, very good recording – very suspenseful and cool.

Constructive Comments: Great sounding song, sounds like something that could work in many different types of movies, I can see it working well in a Mystery Movie or just a long flashback of the past – best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: RICARDO ALONSO
Song: Jungla De Espiritus (Spirit’s Jungle)

Reviewer: Jeff Cowhick

Positive Comments: I enjoyed this piece a lot but I think that it needs to be more busy for me. It needed to have more of a lead presence at times. Otherwise I really thought it was an enjoyable piece to listen to. Maybe try having it reviewed under a different genre. Progressive rock has to have a really good lead section to legitimize the source of the writer.

Constructive Comments: Everything was pretty excellent overall I think. You should consider adding some real instrumentation to make it more organic I think otherwise it comes out sounding like something you would hear in a video game. Also like I said before, if it doesn’t have more of a lead section to focus on then I would perhaps think about bringing in a vocal presence.

Broadjam Artist: RICARDO ALONSO
Song: Jungla De Espiritus (Spirit’s Jungle)

Reviewer: Jeff Cowhick

Positive Comments: I enjoyed this piece a lot but I think that it needs to be more busy for me. It needed to have more of a lead presence at times. Otherwise I really thought it was an enjoyable piece to listen to. Maybe try having it reviewed under a different genre. Progressive rock has to have a really good lead section to legitimize the source of the writer.

Constructive Comments: Everything was pretty excellent overall I think. You should consider adding some real instrumentation to make it more organic I think otherwise it comes out sounding like something you would hear in a video game. Also like I said before, if it doesn’t have more of a lead section to focus on then I would perhaps think about bringing in a vocal presence.

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: ANSWER MAN

Reviewer: SPG~Man

Positive Comments: Excellent mid range R&B tune.

Constructive Comments: Nice instrumentation. Certainly hard to sound unique in this market.

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: ANSWER MAN

Reviewer: SPG~Man

Positive Comments: Excellent mid range R&B tune.

Constructive Comments: Nice instrumentation. Certainly hard to sound unique in this market.