Broadjam Artist: RICARDO ALONSO
Song: Jungla De Espiritus (Spirit’s Jungle)
Reviewer: Jeff Cowhick
Positive Comments: I enjoyed this piece a lot but I think that it needs to be more busy for me. It needed to have more of a lead presence at times. Otherwise I really thought it was an enjoyable piece to listen to. Maybe try having it reviewed under a different genre. Progressive rock has to have a really good lead section to legitimize the source of the writer.
Constructive Comments: Everything was pretty excellent overall I think. You should consider adding some real instrumentation to make it more organic I think otherwise it comes out sounding like something you would hear in a video game. Also like I said before, if it doesn’t have more of a lead section to focus on then I would perhaps think about bringing in a vocal presence.