Broadjam Artist: Tristyn
Song: Faceless Foes ( instrumental )
Reviewer: Good Advice
Positive Comments: I know this is a bad review and I really don’t want you to be upset. It’s not that this is a bad song, it is that you tried to do way too much with one song. There must be a hundred ideas crammed in there. I swear you have the basis for maybe 8 or 9 different songs in there.
Constructive Comments: BY jumping around from idea to idea so rapidly and so often, there was nothing that held this song together as a cohesive whole. There was no real central theme or idea that held it all together. In the end it felt more like a collection of different ideas thrown together. Going solely by this song, I would say you have potential, but I would also say you are in desperate need of learning how to edit yourself. Sometime more is not better, sometimes more is just more.