Broadjam Artist: Peter G Olach – PGO
Song: naked
Reviewer: Chet Nichols
Positive Comments: Very cool song. Liked the singer’s voice, very passionate. Cool funk-R&B retro vibe to the arrangement and lyrics. Dug the Way-Wah guitar spinning through the arrangement. Nice recording. Liked the sensual and sexy story-telling that weaved through the song….set up some intrigue, which is had to do today, as so much pop music is just too much in your face. Nice job.
Constructive Comments: Mind you these are my semi-blind constructive comments so take them with a grain of salt OR sugar! I don’t think this is really Chicago Blues, more a hybrid funk-R&B style tune. The vocal was a bit pitchy…not the end of the world, but you may want to tend to it and give the song a better chance for a licensing success for the tune. It would be worth it, as this song has great potential. Finally, the lyrics wander a bit, but stayed on-theme. Also, would have loved to have heard a stronger, hammer-like hook….but, again, that is my first impression. All in all it is a fine song and I dug the sensual nature of the tale. Good luck and thanks for sharing.