Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Dark Desert Sky
Reviewer: T.J. Kirby
Positive Comments: written in 2001 it’s sound is dated if a song does not grab you right away like the opening line you are in trouble if you want people to record your songs listen to the top 30 watch the videos see and hear what’s going on today. songwriting is a craft work on your craft and learn something new everyday good luck and keep writing
Constructive Comments: better hook stronger lyrics and a stronger demo singer