Broadjam Artist: Charlie Shock
Song: CHRISTOPHER COLUMBUS
Reviewer: Chris Tso
Positive Comments: The intro guitar hook is strong. The vocal phrasing is good. The arrangement and shorter second verse keeps the song moving. The rests also help keep the song fresh. Good organic drums and alternative guitar tones support a band feel and genre credibility. Great job!
Constructive Comments: I feel the second verse could benefit from a slightly different vocal phrasing from the first verse to give it more unpredictability. I’m not sure if modulating the chorus toward the end of the song is needed. It raises the key to the point where the lead vocal feels like he’s singing at the top of his range. Maybe extra instrumental hooks or simple background vocals could keep the interest without modulation?