Broadjam Artist: Hank Thomas
Song: Born With A Broken Heart
Reviewer: Pat Flanakin
Positive Comments: I like the title and the hook. I think this can be improved with a lyric that is more descriptive of why the singer was born with a broken heart – it does touch on it, but it would be more interesting if it described some failed relationships and what the effect was on the singer – even somewhat funny circumstances that would draw the listener to want to hear it again. After hearing the song again, I see that that was done to a point, but I think there could be even more of that. The vocal was good, but I felt that the harmony was louder than the singer.
Constructive Comments: The lyric could be more descriptive. The harmony could be adjusted so that the lead vocal is more outfront. The production could be clearer, but that would be up to the opportunity provider as to whether it is broadcast quality.