Broadjam Artist: Peter G Olach – PGO
Song: another man (demo)
Reviewer: Pat Flanakin
Positive Comments: Reminds me of Ian Anderson of Jethro Tull. I like the feel of the song and it is rather unique. I really like the hook. The production is very clear. The vocal is very clear and understandable which is great in an age where you can’t understand the lyrics in most songs right now. I like the production which emphasizes the pain that this guy is going through. I like the lyrics and don’t believe they need any improvement. Overall, I think it is a very well thought out song which need little or no improvement.
Constructive Comments: My only comment would be to start out the production a little softer and then raise it to the level that it is now in the second measure or so.