Broadjam Artist: Nigel Barrett
Song: Sorry
Reviewer: CAEDMON’S DREAM
Positive Comments: + “I’m Sorry” has a nice sound with quality lead vocals + up-tempo groove with musically moving bass lines+ has memorable hooks, good form, and clear sonic production + tune fits Adult Contemporary genre or movie track
Constructive Comments: * love bass playing/sound…nice feel with drm trk* intro is short and fitting* at 1st vs I would cut swirling keys and bring them in on just the choruses – leads to better recognition of vocal lyric and less repetition/monotony of synths/keys the bass/dms CAN hold it together* no guitars at all? my suggestion would be light acc guit strumming L/R on vs and add a clean lead sound on pre-chorus and choruses* LAST COMMENT I would rather hear a mix of backing vocals female, male, choir, etc) because lead vocal has so much character/tone etc. hearing the same as backing takes away from it* I know all this costs money… but this is a great track with even greater potential!