Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: Daniel
Reviewer: Bob Stump
Positive Comments: music fits the lyrics. Vocals are a good match for feel .Tone quality is good. Instrumentation fits the song. A thoughtful song to chat with a friend and remember a loved one
Constructive Comments: I was hoping the chorus would happen but instead it was an instrumental . Remembering a loved one is a challenging theme. I was hoping for more story leading to a stronger hook. Some of the lyrics do not have plain speak – ” now and then I chance”” nevermore ” I hope this was helpful-Write on !