Broadjam Artist: Fred Kimmel
Song: Karaoke Rock (featuring Claudia Kimmel)
Reviewer: Good Advice
Positive Comments: This actually isn’t a bad song, but it is more of a B-side. it was fun.
Constructive Comments: The intro really flirted with the “Highway to the Danger Zone”, and the ending needed an extra punch at the end, maybe a drum hit or something to really put the period on the sentence.The dramatic pause before every new verse was overused and by the end of the song was a bit gimmicky.The instrumental at around 1:47 seemed a little out of place, however the part where you rapped that little bit I thought was really good and should have been slid into that instrumentals place and thrown out the instrumental. The rap would have been more impactful earlier in the song, especially since it was short and sweet and those lyrics really helped to bolster the other lyrics.Be careful adding in too many electronic sound effects into your mix, most of them to me were unnecessary and just were kind of there without actually adding anything to the song. when it comes to those effects you have to be real judicial in how you use them, less is more.Please don’t take this comments as negative, I actually liked this song quite a bit for a bubble gum pop song. I am just trying to give you useful advice to make either this song or your future songs better because you have a good sound and potential.