Broadjam Artist: Edmond Allmond
Song: Euphoria
Reviewer: Good Advice
Positive Comments: I liked the overall composition from a melody standpoint, and I thought the piano had a solid sound to it.
Constructive Comments: I think I know who you are, but if it is someone else you are making the same mistake that the other person makes in her recordings. You are overusing the dramatic pause. Dramatic pauses aren’t as big a deal if there are other instruments to carry the momentum through the pause, but when it is just one instrument it is a negative. Every time I start to get into the song, there is a pause, then i start to get into the song there is a pause. The initial pause that happens when you switch from intro to main body of the song was good. The next 40 or so pauses did not add anything only detracted from the song.