Broadjam Artist: Fred Kimmel
Song: River Flow (Earth Version)
Reviewer: Jeff Cowhick
Positive Comments: That was Awesome stuff! I love it. Keep up the good work. I like the passion in the vocal track. It was very felt and the music matched the intensity of the vocal as well. At first I thought the guitar sound was a little shaky but after I went back and listened again I thought I liked it better and that it was nice to just have it stick out like that.
Constructive Comments: This one is really hard to critique but if I had to I would say that you may want to look into taking out the guitar entirely and see how it holds together. I have a feeling that you want the guitar to sound contrasting like the way that it is, and this will probably fall on deaf ears but I would try a clean guitar sound personally with a lot of preamp so as to be able to hear the picking. In fact, I would try using an acoustic guitar.