Month: October 2018

Broadjam Artist: Sali Oguri
Song: Sometimes

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very well put-together piece. Reminds me a lot of Pat Benatar. Incredible vocals and really good arrangement and instrumentation. Lyrics invoke a lot of emotion.

Constructive Comments: Very good piece.

Broadjam Artist: Sali Oguri
Song: Sometimes

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very well put-together piece. Reminds me a lot of Pat Benatar. Incredible vocals and really good arrangement and instrumentation. Lyrics invoke a lot of emotion.

Constructive Comments: Very good piece.

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: He Loves You (Ritchie/Dunkle)

Reviewer: Saebella

Positive Comments: I would categorize this song a Pop Religious. This song makes me think about life in general. I love the questions in the lyrics, It causes the listener to really reflect and think about these questions seriously. I like the middle part where the instruments take the center stage. That is a nice touch. Overall the song is beautiful and definitely reassuring that “he loves you!”

Constructive Comments: Beautiful song! After the climax of the song where you are saying “He Loves you” repetitively, it would be very interesting if you ended with posing the same question “You ask me why” then end if with “He love you”. It may help to put some more power into your singing voice. This is very calming and reassuring song.

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: He Loves You (Ritchie/Dunkle)

Reviewer: Saebella

Positive Comments: I would categorize this song a Pop Religious. This song makes me think about life in general. I love the questions in the lyrics, It causes the listener to really reflect and think about these questions seriously. I like the middle part where the instruments take the center stage. That is a nice touch. Overall the song is beautiful and definitely reassuring that “he loves you!”

Constructive Comments: Beautiful song! After the climax of the song where you are saying “He Loves you” repetitively, it would be very interesting if you ended with posing the same question “You ask me why” then end if with “He love you”. It may help to put some more power into your singing voice. This is very calming and reassuring song.

Broadjam Artist: David James
Song: Strange Lights (Ft. CoriAnder & Becky Cole)

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I really like the dreamy sound and the beautiful vocals, almost trance like, very good instrumentation and well recorded.

Constructive Comments: I really like the sound of the instruments and the vocals – really does sound like a dream – I think the only thing that I would do is increase the volume on the vocals and maybe change the frequency of the vocals as well, because they blend in just a little too much with the music – best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: David James
Song: Strange Lights (Ft. CoriAnder & Becky Cole)

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I really like the dreamy sound and the beautiful vocals, almost trance like, very good instrumentation and well recorded.

Constructive Comments: I really like the sound of the instruments and the vocals – really does sound like a dream – I think the only thing that I would do is increase the volume on the vocals and maybe change the frequency of the vocals as well, because they blend in just a little too much with the music – best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: ICE MARCH (instrumental)

Reviewer: Saebella

Positive Comments: I do not usually review instrumentals alone, without lyric. But this kept me on my toes. I like it, its very interesting and I am not at all bored. I am glad this is not a very repetitive instrumental. This has a lot of life. I can feel the movement. I can see this instrument being on broadway musical or some type of dramatic show. The instruments remind me of School Band.

Constructive Comments: As I said, before it is hard for me to review songs without lyrics. But this instrumental has a lot of life and excitement. I can see these instruments telling a story. Which is so hard to do without the use of words, but you have accomplished that. Great work on this. I can picture this music being the background of a musical.

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: ICE MARCH (instrumental)

Reviewer: Saebella

Positive Comments: I do not usually review instrumentals alone, without lyric. But this kept me on my toes. I like it, its very interesting and I am not at all bored. I am glad this is not a very repetitive instrumental. This has a lot of life. I can feel the movement. I can see this instrument being on broadway musical or some type of dramatic show. The instruments remind me of School Band.

Constructive Comments: As I said, before it is hard for me to review songs without lyrics. But this instrumental has a lot of life and excitement. I can see these instruments telling a story. Which is so hard to do without the use of words, but you have accomplished that. Great work on this. I can picture this music being the background of a musical.

Broadjam Artist: SeedMusikGroup
Song: Feel It All Over

Reviewer: Saebella

Positive Comments: This song genre would be Rap with a specific Hip Hop tone. The lyrics are cool and the hook of the song is really catchy and memorable. The song reminds me of true new york Hip Hop. Like old school hip hop when songs used to be about something. I can picture this song being an anthem in the club or a party.

Constructive Comments: As I said above, I can see this song being played religiously at clubs and parties. Especially with the song having a east coast vibe and feeling. I can also picture this song in Movies, on Television etc, about shows or movies based in New york. This has original Hip Hop type feel that today’s radio lacks. Keep it up!

Broadjam Artist: SeedMusikGroup
Song: Feel It All Over

Reviewer: Saebella

Positive Comments: This song genre would be Rap with a specific Hip Hop tone. The lyrics are cool and the hook of the song is really catchy and memorable. The song reminds me of true new york Hip Hop. Like old school hip hop when songs used to be about something. I can picture this song being an anthem in the club or a party.

Constructive Comments: As I said above, I can see this song being played religiously at clubs and parties. Especially with the song having a east coast vibe and feeling. I can also picture this song in Movies, on Television etc, about shows or movies based in New york. This has original Hip Hop type feel that today’s radio lacks. Keep it up!