Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Manners Rap
Reviewer: Saebella
Positive Comments: This genre has a jazz undertone to it. I would not necessarily consider this Hip Hop, but I could see the blend of both styles of genre. Being that the Song is talking about “Mind your Manners”, it sounds as if it would work great as a children’s song. You have the potential to market this song in something like Sesame St., or a popular young kids show.
Constructive Comments: This lyrics of the verses go along with the lyrics to the hook. The song is talking about Manners. I can tell this is a children’s song. To make it more appealing I would use something with a happier beat. Something Fun that kids can dance to! This will get them exciting about learning their manners. Right now it feels like a strict, poised lesson instead of fun tutorial. The singer can also show a better performance by not being as poised. It seems to stern for a child. I like the kids singing at the end! Maybe you can incorporate them into more of the song too! Kids like hearing other kids!