Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Dawning (Ritchie/Dunkle)
Reviewer: Stanford
Positive Comments: Some interesting sounds and textures, sort of electronic mystical.
Constructive Comments: For me I think the vocal is key and it’s not quite there in my view. Personally I wouldn’t pan it at all, it’s a bit distracting, move everything else around it and somehow have it deeper in the background but still I want to hear the lyrics clearly. I don’t like the synth bass, that’s a thing of mine though but I’d replace that, it sticks out for me but I do like all the animal sounds and other ‘odd’ things going on, makes it interesting.