Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Dawning (Ritchie/Dunkle)
Reviewer: David James
Positive Comments: This is a very atmospheric piece. Nice use of ambient nature sounds. Great synths and intelligent use of percussion. Excellent depth of sound in the tune. Really well mixed and mastered.
Constructive Comments: I would have introduced the vocal later in the tune, as I feel it would make more impact as a new element adding interest as the piece builds. I marked down the hook as I think the chord structure and vocal melody would have benefited from more variety, perhaps by mixing up the chord sequence as the tune progresses. Overall though it is enjoyable and worth pitching for appropriate listings. Perhaps shorter edits would be useful for media use.