Month: August 2018

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: I Know Someone Who Knows

Reviewer: Massimo Carola

Positive Comments: I like very much the energy put into this.

Constructive Comments: The lead vocal is too washed in the reverb and the background vocals dry and too loud. This creates a confusion while listening.

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSS
Song: I’ve Been Lookin

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very nicely performed and produced piece with a really good hook and excellent vocals and harmonies.

Constructive Comments: Very good tune.

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSS
Song: I’ve Been Lookin

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very nicely performed and produced piece with a really good hook and excellent vocals and harmonies.

Constructive Comments: Very good tune.

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: King of the Hill

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very witty and entertaining piece. I really like the piano riff. It’s really good that you didn’t try to turn this into an ABACAB-type song, with chorus, bridge, etc, because that’s not what a story song is about. It’s better just like this, and the last minute plus adds a lot to it. Voice might not be the greatest in the world, but perfect for this kind of song. Reminds me a lot of Tom Waits. There’s a ton of soul in these lyrics.

Constructive Comments: Great job.

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: King of the Hill

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very witty and entertaining piece. I really like the piano riff. It’s really good that you didn’t try to turn this into an ABACAB-type song, with chorus, bridge, etc, because that’s not what a story song is about. It’s better just like this, and the last minute plus adds a lot to it. Voice might not be the greatest in the world, but perfect for this kind of song. Reminds me a lot of Tom Waits. There’s a ton of soul in these lyrics.

Constructive Comments: Great job.

Broadjam Artist: David James
Song: With Your Love (Ft. Kerri-Ann Lewis)

Reviewer: FIRE RAQ ENETERTAINMENT

Positive Comments: keep making music that make you feel comfortable and keep up the good work

Constructive Comments: keep writing that would you a better artist and record whenever you get a chance and work with people that on the vibes as you.much respect

Broadjam Artist: Mark Tha Shark
Song: Malt liquor blooze

Reviewer: Jeff Maguire

Positive Comments: Hyper psycho I’m drunk off my ass blues, many good ideas here. Sounds like an outtake of Chile Peppers rehearsal after they drank way to much Tequila.

Constructive Comments: Hard to critique this, there are good ideas and I expect there is a good song in there but the execution is lacking. To start with the lead riff is to loud , the drums are to loud, and it’s hard to make out the vocals because they are down in the mix. I think that would be a decent starting point, and maybe rethinking the arrangement. It seems like a Red Hot Chile Peppers vibe, so it might be a good idea to use some track of there’s as the starting point of a way to get a coherent song out of it. IOW … listen to the way they structure and perform a tune and imitate it, then little by little, bring in your own thing.

Broadjam Artist: Mark Tha Shark
Song: Malt liquor blooze

Reviewer: Jeff Maguire

Positive Comments: Hyper psycho I’m drunk off my ass blues, many good ideas here. Sounds like an outtake of Chile Peppers rehearsal after they drank way to much Tequila.

Constructive Comments: Hard to critique this, there are good ideas and I expect there is a good song in there but the execution is lacking. To start with the lead riff is to loud , the drums are to loud, and it’s hard to make out the vocals because they are down in the mix. I think that would be a decent starting point, and maybe rethinking the arrangement. It seems like a Red Hot Chile Peppers vibe, so it might be a good idea to use some track of there’s as the starting point of a way to get a coherent song out of it. IOW … listen to the way they structure and perform a tune and imitate it, then little by little, bring in your own thing.

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Mama Della NEW KILLER MIX Piano & Sax

Reviewer: Nigel Barrett

Positive Comments: Really nice laid back track. Especially loved the reverb setting on the soprano sax track – really makes the track sound dreamy – almost ambient.

Constructive Comments: Nothing to add as I like it as it is.

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Mama Della NEW KILLER MIX Piano & Sax

Reviewer: Nigel Barrett

Positive Comments: Really nice laid back track. Especially loved the reverb setting on the soprano sax track – really makes the track sound dreamy – almost ambient.

Constructive Comments: Nothing to add as I like it as it is.