Month: August 2018

Broadjam Artist: Flashlyte
Song: AngelFeather

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I like the keyboard sounds and I also like the story line as well.

Constructive Comments: Sounds OK however, I think that the vocals need to be turned back a bit and maybe bring in a different singer or maybe a background singer for this song, the song would also sound much better with drums and a bass guitar – best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: Flashlyte
Song: AngelFeather

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I like the keyboard sounds and I also like the story line as well.

Constructive Comments: Sounds OK however, I think that the vocals need to be turned back a bit and maybe bring in a different singer or maybe a background singer for this song, the song would also sound much better with drums and a bass guitar – best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: Massa
Song: Worn Out Working 2

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I love the way the song starts with the acoustic guitar and drums – I also like the sound of the lead singer, very unique voice! Very cool harmonica as well.

Constructive Comments: I think this song has great potential and could go far – I don’t think that I’d change a thing – the only thing that should be changed is the length of the song – I would cut it down to 3 minutes because there is a lot of repetition – best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: Massa
Song: Worn Out Working 2

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I love the way the song starts with the acoustic guitar and drums – I also like the sound of the lead singer, very unique voice! Very cool harmonica as well.

Constructive Comments: I think this song has great potential and could go far – I don’t think that I’d change a thing – the only thing that should be changed is the length of the song – I would cut it down to 3 minutes because there is a lot of repetition – best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: allison bolton
Song: you can keep the ring

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I like the piano and the vocals as well – I really like the lyrics as well – sounds a little like Eric Carmen.

Constructive Comments: I like the song but I would change a few things, first I would change the hook to “instead of you can keep the ring” to the name of a girl like Mary Jane – I would also add drums and a bass guitar to give the song a little more depth – best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: allison bolton
Song: you can keep the ring

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I like the piano and the vocals as well – I really like the lyrics as well – sounds a little like Eric Carmen.

Constructive Comments: I like the song but I would change a few things, first I would change the hook to “instead of you can keep the ring” to the name of a girl like Mary Jane – I would also add drums and a bass guitar to give the song a little more depth – best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Zeroing In On You / Rock Funk

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very cool and original piece. Love how well this holds together, with the guitars working so well in tandem.

Constructive Comments: Really cool and original sound.

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Zeroing In On You / Rock Funk

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very cool and original piece. Love how well this holds together, with the guitars working so well in tandem.

Constructive Comments: Really cool and original sound.

Broadjam Artist: a girl named jaen
Song: Freaks

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very intriguing and energetic piece with top notch instrumentation and effects and great vocals. Very true subject matter.

Constructive Comments: Nice job here.

Broadjam Artist: a girl named jaen
Song: Freaks

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Very intriguing and energetic piece with top notch instrumentation and effects and great vocals. Very true subject matter.

Constructive Comments: Nice job here.