Broadjam Artist: Derrick ProcellSong: BETHLEHEM PAReviewer: amy abernathyPositive Comments: I loved the hook Bethlehem PA, and the parells to a Christmas message. You did a good job with the lyrics. I loved the story you told. You sang it with passion …

Broadjam Artist: Derrick Procell
Song: BETHLEHEM PA
Reviewer: amy abernathy
Positive Comments: I loved the hook Bethlehem PA, and the parells to a Christmas message. You did a good job with the lyrics. I loved the story you told. You sang it with passion and emotion. I think this song has lots of poetential, you did a great job with it. I loved it.
Constructive Comments: I think it needed a little more instrumentation in spots, some spots had alot and some seemed bare.Adding few more licks in there could make it sound really complete and ready. Great song.