Month: August 2018

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Dance In The Moonlight

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Swing on a star. Dreamers we are. These are great lyrics. Simple, memorable and they roll off the tongue so beautifully. This song has a nice, gentle vibe but also has a dynamism to it that sets it apart. Instrumentation is nicely done. Love the percussion/drums. Vocal is crystal clear. Great message, deep but simply presented. Great male/female harmony! Bravo!

Constructive Comments: star/are/guitars Loved the last word the best! Great job guys!

Broadjam Artist: allison bolton
Song: survivor

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: This poignant ballad tells the story of a young woman’s fight against cancer. We all know women who have fought this battle, and this song describes the emotions so beautifully…it put a lump in my throat and reminded me of my friend Christina, who left 3 kids behind. The vocal is gentle and sweet the instrumentation understated, which is perfect because it doesn’t detract from the storytelling. Love the harmonies. Beautiful job all around. Thank you for writing, recording and sharing this important song.

Constructive Comments: The only thing that might improve this song is possibly – instead of doing self harmonies, ask a couple of other singers to join you. Possibly a male and a female voice. But really, it’s amazing just as it is. Did you write it about a particular friend, or was it a “general” made up story?

Broadjam Artist: max quaini
Song: FBI

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Unsettling, dynamic and piercing, this tune definitely has a unique voice all its own. It soars, it screams the guitars, effects and harmonies are all well thought out and flawlessly produced. I like the way this piece builds and the way it ends is pretty cool too.

Constructive Comments: If this is another one of those “band in a box” computer creations, I’ll be hornswoggled. Sounds like a real band to me. Bring out the dancers.

Broadjam Artist: Derrick Procell
Song: BABY PLEASE

Reviewer: Jeff Maguire

Positive Comments: Real solid blues and R&B track, well written and performed all around, great vocals and solid backup. Overall has an 80’s vibe, especially the guitar tone and middle section. Has a very familiar sound which right at the moment I can’t put my finger on, wait, ” I’m So Into You” by Atlanta Rhythm Section.

Constructive Comments: Only criticism’s are that it sounds a dated, and the lyrics while perfectly ok, are totally generic in the style and really don’t help you much. If this track had been released in 1973 with a slightly better lyric it could have been a hit.

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Still I Wonder / Country Alternative

Reviewer: allison bolton

Positive Comments: i like the music and vocals

Constructive Comments: kind of a mix of a pop country

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: VICTORY (instrumental)

Reviewer: allison bolton

Positive Comments: nice sound good recording

Constructive Comments: would love to hear lyrics

Broadjam Artist: Wayne Ammons
Song: Days Go By

Reviewer: allison bolton

Positive Comments: good job i liked your song

Constructive Comments: good job i liked your song

Broadjam Artist: Bobby Caputo
Song: Heart

Reviewer: allison bolton

Positive Comments: wasn’t able to hear the lyrics very well music was good but overtook the vocals

Constructive Comments: i like what i could hear try remixing for better sound

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: I Can Believe Now

Reviewer: allison bolton

Positive Comments: i’m more of a story teller but the quality of this song is great

Constructive Comments: enjoyed but if you told a story in your verses then whet into callin your name it would be great

Broadjam Artist: Nick Coleman and Cole Crawford Hurst
Song: Clarksdale Mississippi

Reviewer: allison bolton

Positive Comments: i’d like to hear this with more instruments but i liked the song

Constructive Comments: maybe some more instruments and background vocals for fullness