Month: August 2018

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Passport to Power Instrumental

Reviewer: Raymond Garrobo

Positive Comments: very nice arrangement, and instrumentation. good work.

Constructive Comments: I would have it remixed to really bring out the parts.

Broadjam Artist: Massa
Song: Worn Out Working 2

Reviewer: Raymond Garrobo

Positive Comments: Great vibe, nice performance, good arrangement. good recording.

Constructive Comments: needs to be re mixed and mastered.

Broadjam Artist: allison bolton
Song: this means trouble

Reviewer: Raymond Garrobo

Positive Comments: music track sounds pretty balanced.

Constructive Comments: The vocal isn’t treated correctly for this type of genre. a lot of sibilance noise, breathing and the performance of the singer just isn’t working.sorry.

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: VICTORY (instrumental)

Reviewer: Raymond Garrobo

Positive Comments: Great 4th of July Song!!I was looking for the fireworks!!

Constructive Comments: A little more build up, maybe another section.could be more epic after the first few measures it really loses steam!

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Red House

Reviewer: Raymond Garrobo

Positive Comments: Band sounds pretty tight, good Performance.

Constructive Comments: needs a new mix.

Broadjam Artist: Richard Espinor
Song: Love Mania

Reviewer: Raymond Garrobo

Positive Comments: you can really play that piano!!

Constructive Comments: very busy with no real musical direction, would like to develop some musical hooks to keep your listener engaged.

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Heart Of Blue (Ritchie/Dunkle)

Reviewer: Raymond Garrobo

Positive Comments: Nice drum tone and playing. keep on playing my friend.

Constructive Comments: The lo fi vocal and deliverance of the performace was a little shaky and with all the reverb on the track, just drowned the vocal which compounds the problem.

Broadjam Artist: Matt Mereu
Song: Beacon Street

Reviewer: Raymond Garrobo

Positive Comments: good production, good playing, good harmonies.

Constructive Comments: song doesn’t really ever go anywhere, it stays in the same place.it could use a new arrangement. just my opinion.

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Crossroads

Reviewer: Raymond Garrobo

Positive Comments: a great cream cover, but the recording makes it hard to listen to.

Constructive Comments: performance is there, maybe just a new mix.

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: ANSWER MAN

Reviewer: Raymond Garrobo

Positive Comments: It Starts out pretty good Then the vocal comes in and it get pretty shaky, but with some coachingin a couple of key areas i think it could be used for a t.v show or something.keep up the good work!

Constructive Comments: I would go for a Little more aggressive vocal style like say Ronnie James Dio, that’s What am Hearing! rewrite some lyrics re record the Drums. I like your guitar tones, those sound pretty good.