Broadjam Artist: Raymond Garrobo
Song: Lazy Day
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Lots of energy here! You can hear it from the very first few notes. Dynamic guitar playing, nice vocals and harmonies. Egg shaker percussion. This is a short song about the desirability of having a lazy day. Really nice guitar playing!
Constructive Comments: I think the song needs work. It needs structure to be a “song” not just a chorus or a ditty. There’s not really a story or verses. I really like your guitar playing, though. Work on fresher rhymes. The ending of the recording is too abrupt. Even though the song is about a lazy day, there is nothing lazy-sounding about the tempo or style of the song…something to think about. Keep on writing! This is not meant to discourage you!