Broadjam Artist: Mark Tha Shark
Song: UNCON BLUE (inst. w/ sax)
Reviewer: Jeff Maguire
Positive Comments: Basic but melodic chord progression, rhythm playing is pretty solid, give it some lyrics and a real form.
Constructive Comments: Sounded like one long extended intro until about a minute and a half in and when a change did finally come it had nothing to do with anything that came before it. The essential riff is solid enough but it really doesn’t qualify as a song as is, just a basic idea that could become a song with some effort. Maybe find a way to meld the two section together in a more fluid way that creates a dynamic and a sense of continuity.