Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: What Must I Do (Selsky/Dunkle)
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: This song, at least in part, reminds me of the bible story of the Philippian Jailor. It seems to refer to the disciples who were set free by the angel (before you disappear). Clever angle on the story put into a song. Excellent rock band instrumentation.
Constructive Comments: Vocal is kind of lackluster. Needs a little more clarity and purpose. Second verse doesn’t seem to be congruent with first verse at all. I think this song still needs some work. Your strong point is the instrumentation! I really like the rock band sound you’ve put together…or maybe it’s a real rock band. Nowadays with these fancy music computer programs…you never know!