Month: June 2018

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Jesus, Savior, Lord

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: The songwriter’s passionate love for Jesus shouts out loud in this rock praise song. I like the electric guitar and driving rock beat. Favorite lyric: least of the saints. Reminds me of the Apostle Paul. Nice outro!

Constructive Comments: Keep working on vocal clarity and pitch.

Broadjam Artist: amy abernathy
Song: We Will See Him

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

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Broadjam Artist: Fred Kimmel
Song: Into You

Reviewer: Introducing Mister Frisky

Positive Comments: Love the over all groove of this cut. Like how it goes from synth to piano under solo. Very interesting and engaging.The string lines work well. Love the slap bass fills. I think the sound quality over all is very good.Like the what sounds like synth sound under the chorus. Over all I though this was a very strong cut.

Constructive Comments: I would like to hear a bit more guitar along with the main synth during the verses. Its a little hard to understand the words as a whole. The doubling sounds good but sometimes cuts into the pronunciation a bit on the vocals. I could use a bit more drums over all, but just a personal preference(no way takes away from song as it is) Again I loved this cut!

Broadjam Artist: Earl.C.Webb
Song: Going Through Changes

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I love the saxophone introduction, the lead vocals are fantastic. Really all the instruments sound very tight and cool. Sounds a little like Michael McDonald and a little like Luther Vandross.

Constructive Comments: I don’t think I’d change a thing on this one – great song and very cool lyrics.

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: I Will Be Redeemed

Reviewer: Mark Tha Shark

Positive Comments: Tells a cool story

Constructive Comments: I wouldnt change anything

Broadjam Artist: Massimo Carola
Song: Humble pie

Reviewer: Mark Tha Shark

Positive Comments: This song would be great in movies

Constructive Comments: It seems to be very short

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Recycle Michael

Reviewer: Massimo Carola

Positive Comments: I like that. I don’t really know if there is a market for that. I believe there is one in children music.

Constructive Comments: I would work to make the sound a bit more cohesive.

Broadjam Artist: Chet Nichols
Song: King Barlow – Harp Solo

Reviewer: Massimo Carola

Positive Comments: Great playing, great intro.

Constructive Comments: The development of the initial idea is not interesting enough and in the end I was a bit bored.

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Actions Speak Louder Than Words

Reviewer: Massimo Carola

Positive Comments: The mood of the song is very interesting.

Constructive Comments: A better balance would help a lot that song that is very interesting in construction and melody. A better singer would put that song to the next level.

Broadjam Artist: Chet Nichols
Song: The Train, Plane Blues (from “Live” CD, “Black & White”)

Reviewer: DENNIS MAKEPEACE

Positive Comments: unusual arrangement,good instrumentation,harmonica sounded good,singer has a powerful voice,

Constructive Comments: no problems but perhaps maybe the vocals could have been a bit clearer in the mix , as I had trouble making out some of the lyrics,but it is a live recording and it can be hard to get everything right for every song in the set, enjoyed it though