Crazy by Earkandi

Earkandi

Broadjam Artist: Earkandi
Song: Crazy

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: Catchy! Good vocal sound and the phrasing is hypnotic. You have a bit of the Adelle warmth and grit in some of the phrases. There’s potential for a very strong Pop tune here.

Constructive Comments: I don’t think the tempo change in the intro does anything for the song. I think you need more infill in the arrangement–probably keys/synth parts that give a 16th or 8th note bed for the rest of the parts to work against. The message of the lyrics doesn’t quite hit–maybe more actual story that informs what’s going on? I think this needs to be more R&B and less of a Post Punk rock vibe.

Earkandi

Broadjam Artist: Earkandi
Song: Crazy

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: Catchy! Good vocal sound and the phrasing is hypnotic. You have a bit of the Adelle warmth and grit in some of the phrases. There’s potential for a very strong Pop tune here.

Constructive Comments: I don’t think the tempo change in the intro does anything for the song. I think you need more infill in the arrangement–probably keys/synth parts that give a 16th or 8th note bed for the rest of the parts to work against. The message of the lyrics doesn’t quite hit–maybe more actual story that informs what’s going on? I think this needs to be more R&B and less of a Post Punk rock vibe.

It Could A Been A Bad Move / Rock by Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: It Could A Been A Bad Move / Rock

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Really good piece with a great beat that keeps your toes tapping throughout. Ideal choice of instruments. Just an overall really cool piece.

Constructive Comments: Keep up the good work.

Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: It Could A Been A Bad Move / Rock

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Really good piece with a great beat that keeps your toes tapping throughout. Ideal choice of instruments. Just an overall really cool piece.

Constructive Comments: Keep up the good work.

It Could A Been A Bad Move / Rock by Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: It Could A Been A Bad Move / Rock

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Really good piece with a great beat that keeps your toes tapping throughout. Ideal choice of instruments. Just an overall really cool piece.

Constructive Comments: Keep up the good work.

Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: It Could A Been A Bad Move / Rock

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Really good piece with a great beat that keeps your toes tapping throughout. Ideal choice of instruments. Just an overall really cool piece.

Constructive Comments: Keep up the good work.

Best Of Your Love (Pop – Adult Contemporary, Country Pop) by Steve Dafoe – Songwriter

Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – SongwriterSong: Best Of Your Love (Pop – Adult Contemporary, Country Pop)Reviewer: MGBPositive Comments: Great acoustic piece, very well arranged with haunting and beautiful vocals. Nice instrumental and bridge works very…

Steve Dafoe - Songwriter

Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: Best Of Your Love (Pop – Adult Contemporary, Country Pop)

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Great acoustic piece, very well arranged with haunting and beautiful vocals. Nice instrumental and bridge works very well. This puts me very much to mind of some of the stuff Bread did back in the early 70’s.

Constructive Comments: Really nice piece with a great laid-back feel to it.

Best Of Your Love (Pop – Adult Contemporary, Country Pop) by Steve Dafoe – Songwriter

Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – SongwriterSong: Best Of Your Love (Pop – Adult Contemporary, Country Pop)Reviewer: MGBPositive Comments: Great acoustic piece, very well arranged with haunting and beautiful vocals. Nice instrumental and bridge works very…

Steve Dafoe - Songwriter

Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: Best Of Your Love (Pop – Adult Contemporary, Country Pop)

Reviewer: MGB

Positive Comments: Great acoustic piece, very well arranged with haunting and beautiful vocals. Nice instrumental and bridge works very well. This puts me very much to mind of some of the stuff Bread did back in the early 70’s.

Constructive Comments: Really nice piece with a great laid-back feel to it.

Actions Speak Louder Than Words by Randal Dunkle

Broadjam Artist: Randal DunkleSong: Actions Speak Louder Than WordsReviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip PatPositive Comments: like the funky simple beginning, different beginningConstructive Comments: As always I enjoy this artist–always coming up with so…

Randal Dunkle

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Actions Speak Louder Than Words

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: like the funky simple beginning, different beginning

Constructive Comments: As always I enjoy this artist–always coming up with something new—watching the progresshis message is simple really –and he just keeps improving his skills with each recording!All The Best Randle!

Actions Speak Louder Than Words by Randal Dunkle

Broadjam Artist: Randal DunkleSong: Actions Speak Louder Than WordsReviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip PatPositive Comments: like the funky simple beginning, different beginningConstructive Comments: As always I enjoy this artist–always coming up with so…

Randal Dunkle

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Actions Speak Louder Than Words

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: like the funky simple beginning, different beginning

Constructive Comments: As always I enjoy this artist–always coming up with something new—watching the progresshis message is simple really –and he just keeps improving his skills with each recording!All The Best Randle!

Sunrays by Brenda Craven

Broadjam Artist: Brenda CravenSong: SunraysReviewer: Buc WilliamsPositive Comments: Thought this was going to be a contemporary country song. Nice instrumental for tv or film.Constructive Comments: I dont have any suggestions for this,song. Its peacefu…

Brenda Craven

Broadjam Artist: Brenda Craven
Song: Sunrays

Reviewer: Buc Williams

Positive Comments: Thought this was going to be a contemporary country song. Nice instrumental for tv or film.

Constructive Comments: I dont have any suggestions for this,song. Its peaceful,and relaxing. Nice.

Hollywood, Hollywood (was #1 Broadjam: Rock) by Chet Nichols

Broadjam Artist: Chet NicholsSong: Hollywood, Hollywood (was #1 Broadjam: Rock)Reviewer: Jeff RobertsPositive Comments: It’s Chester!! And here he’s sounding a lot like Little Feat with a lazy groove or maybe Ry Cooder. I love this sort of melanchol…

Chet Nichols

Broadjam Artist: Chet Nichols
Song: Hollywood, Hollywood (was #1 Broadjam: Rock)

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: It’s Chester!! And here he’s sounding a lot like Little Feat with a lazy groove or maybe Ry Cooder. I love this sort of melancholy groove and behind the beat riffing. Big vocal performance that sounds great, and the lyrics are compelling. Love the guitar fills too! Nice one Chet!!

Constructive Comments: The drums sound like preset #48 on the keyboard, but you make it rock around that.

Hollywood, Hollywood (was #1 Broadjam: Rock) by Chet Nichols

Broadjam Artist: Chet NicholsSong: Hollywood, Hollywood (was #1 Broadjam: Rock)Reviewer: Jeff RobertsPositive Comments: It’s Chester!! And here he’s sounding a lot like Little Feat with a lazy groove or maybe Ry Cooder. I love this sort of melanchol…

Chet Nichols

Broadjam Artist: Chet Nichols
Song: Hollywood, Hollywood (was #1 Broadjam: Rock)

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: It’s Chester!! And here he’s sounding a lot like Little Feat with a lazy groove or maybe Ry Cooder. I love this sort of melancholy groove and behind the beat riffing. Big vocal performance that sounds great, and the lyrics are compelling. Love the guitar fills too! Nice one Chet!!

Constructive Comments: The drums sound like preset #48 on the keyboard, but you make it rock around that.